Dance with the Fae by Elisabeth Hobbes | Book Review

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Dance with the Fae by Elisabeth Hobbes
Published by One More Chapter on February 27, 2025
Genres: Fantasy, Romance, LGBT
Pages: 384
Format: Paperback
Source: The Forbidden Wing

Content Warnings: PTSD, Death, Homophobia, Violence, Sickness, Attempted Suicide, Sexual Assault, Kidnapping, Imprisonment, Infidelity
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Kit Arton-Price should be celebrating. It's his engagement party and, unlike many young men of his generation, he survived The Great War. Whilst his fiancée, Adelaide, is dancing with one of their guests, the enigmatic Mr Wilde, the scars on Kit's face bear the heavy toll of battle – and the scars on his heart bear a secret he's been forced to carry in silence. In the morning, Adelaide cannot be woken and the village doctor declares it's the mystifying 'Sleeping Sickness' – an unexplainable epidemic affecting society. But there is more to this sickness than first appears and it's not long before Kit is lured into a strange new realm. One of magic and danger. The realm of the fae…

Sigh...I was so looking forward to my first month's subscription of The Forbidden Wing by The Locked Library, which included Dance with the Fae by Elisabeth Hobbes. The original and new cover designs were great, the story sounded right up my alley, and it included faeries. Sounds like a win-win, right? Unfortunately, not so much. I'm not going to say I hated Dance with the Fae, but it wasn't great either. Let's start with what I liked.

First, I loved all of the characters and their development. Hobbes did an excellent job creating three-dimensional characters that felt both real and otherworldly at the same time. Not all characters are lovable, but their story and quest still felt important to me, despite my reservations. It takes an author who knows their craft to create such an attachment to even unlovable characters. Kit was my favorite by far, representing the bisexual community at a time when such proclivities could get you killed.

Not only do we have excellent and tastefully done queer-rep that added to the story and character development, but also PTSD representation that, again, added to the story and character development. As the granddaughter, sister, and wife of war veterans, I have firsthand experience with the trials and tribulations of PTSD. Authors often get it wrong, using what they see in the media to fuel their own imaginations. It's not always zoning out and screaming and nightmares; it's also the all-consuming guilt, the unregulated emotions, the racing brain, the debilitating anxiety. Kit perfectly encapsulates the nuances of PTSD in a real and meaningful way.

While the overall story was fine and cute, the pacing was not. There were times events moved at a snail's pace, slugging along endlessly, while important moments seemed to fly by in a heartbeat. Maybe this was done because time flows differently in the Otherworld, but it seems more like a failure on Hobbes' part than a plot device. The entire book is building up to what should be an "epic" battle that determines the fate of two worlds, but instead it lasts, what?...three pages? It was a little longer than that, but you get my drift.

I didn't mind that parts felt crazy or weird, because that is the point of the Otherworld, but I did care that the story's pacing was so off that it detracted from everything else. Poor pacing can destroy an entire book, and it certainly did that here. Maybe it won't for you.

Overall, Dance with the Fae by Elisabeth Hobbes was just okay. It was certainly disappointing as the first book in a new-to-me subscription box, but it did make for a quick palate cleanser all the same.